Score: 5

"Mistake."

submission: Ghost Motel 4 Outtakes

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
You do know that the souvenir shop scene and the trapeze scene could
both be used right?

~Ways To Improve~
Try actually trying the ideas and putting it in the movie.
Cause I don't see how some of them were better than the rest.

~Extra Comments~
Lol,we were drawn in haste.

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 7

"WoW.........."

submission: TANKMAN 4

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
Your best yet man......
Your finest work coated with sugar on top.

~Ways To Improve~
Don't leave scribble lines.
They make this flash crappy to most of the people here.

~Extra Comments~
LMAO.

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 7

"<<Voted 2>>"

submission: Ghost Motel 4

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
I spot lots of mistakes and very little good points man.
Looks like this is one of your worst ones then....

~Ways To Improve~
Give emotion to Joseph's voice,it sounds weak.
The music keeps repeating and is very annoying,you should change it
at different scenes.
The sculptures should move when you move your mouse them just
like the paintings.
The clown's face doesn't fit his fearsome voice.
Joseph should look at the guy with spiked hair when he was talking.

~Extra Comments~
The girl beside was snitched under my nose!
Damn,I hate demons....

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 7

"<<Voted 3>>"

submission: Ghost Motel 3

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
Much better than the rest,introducing jobs brought the ratings up.
Not too shabby with the drawing too.

~Ways To Improve~
Ok,voices have improved,the graphics way better but still need a bit of improving.
First of all,there were those safety lines for coming in but not going out?Sounds wierd,don't you think?
Next,why doesn't the tear he shed drip and gather into a puddle on
the table instead of sliding down?

~Extra Comments~
Cool jobs man,but not enough.
I still those jobs are cool,if only life after death were so simple.

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 6

"<<Voted 2>>"

submission: Ghost Motel 2

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
Not very well done man.
The animation looks ok,the voices still sound wierd and it was very
short.

~Ways To Improve~
The half-eaten human corpse looked like a flat balloon and there was
nothing much to do......oh ya,fix the voices.
Sorry for all the telling you to fix it but it's the truth.

~Extra Comments~
You can't get be choked to death by a demon,you're already dead!.....
........right?

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 7

"<<Voted 2>>"

submission: Ghost Motel 1

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
Oh,a interactive movie.....interesting.
Suprisingly,I was scared of the wierd ghoul pic......must have seen too
many crappy flashes to be scared anymore....

~Ways To Improve~
The voices......they don't sound very good man.
And when they were talking the speech bubble would be better if they
were round not......squareish.

~Extra Comments~
Bloody moving paintings...

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 9

"Meh...........that was"

submission: FBF Randomness

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
Colourful desplay man......quite nice to look at,a good time-killer.

~Ways To Improve~
Make the background flashy and glowing.
I know some colours won't be seen easily,but you won't know till you
right?

~Extra Comments~
Singaporean work is just beautiful,voted 5.

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 8

"B"

submission: Clock Day '05: BoltClawk

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
A jolly and cute short......not bad.
Happy belated clockday!.......oh never mind.

~Ways To Improve~
After pressing the button,i noticed a kindof zip closing and opening.
Peharps zipping it up with a zipping sound might help?

~Extra Comments~
Voted 5.......XC

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 10

"ZZZZZZZZ......"

submission: In My Dreams

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
No words may descibe the hidden meaning behind your flash.
The animation is without words,flawless.

~Ways To Improve~
Go deeper,make it longer man.
Surely your dream wasn't that short and your memory that poor?

~Extra comments~
Hope to see more of your good work man.

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 9

"Amazingly done man....."

submission: Tim the Zombie

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
Sweet animating man.
Despite the small filespace,you managed to create a amazing flash.

~Ways To Improve~
Add more options.
It's the reason it's so short cause there's nothing much to do after
viewing all the emotes.

~Extra Comments~
My jawwwwwwwwwouch.......

Till next time man,
~Ice~