Score: 5

"Mistake."

submission: Ghost Motel 4 Outtakes

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
You do know that the souvenir shop scene and the trapeze scene could
both be used right?

~Ways To Improve~
Try actually trying the ideas and putting it in the movie.
Cause I don't see how some of them were better than the rest.

~Extra Comments~
Lol,we were drawn in haste.

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 7

"WoW.........."

submission: TANKMAN 4

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
Your best yet man......
Your finest work coated with sugar on top.

~Ways To Improve~
Don't leave scribble lines.
They make this flash crappy to most of the people here.

~Extra Comments~
LMAO.

Till next time man,
~Ice~

Score: 7

"<<Voted 2>>"

submission: Ghost Motel 4

date: December 11, 2006

~Opinion~
I spot lots of mistakes and very little good points man.
Looks like this is one of your worst ones then....

~Ways To Improve~
Give emotion to Joseph's voice,it sounds weak.
The music keeps repeating and is very annoying,you should change it
at different scenes.
The sculptures should move when you move your mouse them just
like the paintings.
The clown's face doesn't fit his fearsome voice.
Joseph should look at the guy with spiked hair when he was talking.

~Extra Comments~
The girl beside was snitched under my nose!
Damn,I hate demons....

Till next time man,
~Ice~